PAGE
PANEL 1
View of Dylerino and Alberto.
ALBERTO
So are you all saying you want it to go back to how it was?
DYLERINO
With John in control again?
CAPTION 3
Nobody wasn’t John in control.
He ends up talking to himself..
CAPTION
If he didn’t do that, we wouldn’t exist.
CAPTION 2
He’s got you there.
PANEL 2
Jonly tossing the moleskin notebook on the table over to John. Earf is next to Jonly, he has a hand up pointing like "I have an idea"
JONLY NONLY
Yes! Take this thing back!
EARF
But we have some conditions.
PANEL 3
Pull back, we can see the table with the people around it. The notebook is in front on John
JOHN
Conditions?
EARF
(off panel)
Yup.
CALVEREENA
The dork made a list.
K-DIZZLE
(whisper)
Almost got it...
PANEL 4
View of Earf holding a list.
Out Demands list:
1.Better art
2.Tell a fucking story
3.Diverse characters
4.Character development
5.Continuity
6.A puppy
7.Love interests
8.Super powers
9.Average size dong
10.More fishing!
11.A mystery to solve
12.Better pay
13.Something interesting
14.Another cool demand
EARF
Better art, try and tell a frickin' story,
CALVEREENA
More chicks!
EARF
Shut up.
PANEL 5
View fromt he head of the table lookign down the table. We see John writing in the notebook. K-Dizzle is sitll building her device. Dylerino and Alberto are turned around facing the reader looking at each other leaning over like they are talking in secret.
DYLERINO
So you brought us in to be your union reps at the contract negotiations?
ALBERTO
You think any of this was pre-written? This probably just happened as it was getting written out.
JONLY NONLY
We want better themes to our issues.
CALCULATOR
Like an issue that’s all hentai!
JONLY NONLY & K-DIZZLE & EARF & JOHN
NO!
CAPTION
That’s man idea...
CAPTION 3
I’ll quit.
CAPTION 2
You literally can’t quit.

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Look at KD go! What is she making?!

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