PAGE
PANEL 1
Earf standing at the white board, on the white board is a complex diagram. It doesn't need to make any sense, in fact the less sense it makes the better.
EARF
Our profits are down! And we need to rally the troops to increase that bottom line!
CAPTION 3
Didn't he just say they where talking about sleeping on the job? What?
PANEL 2
Earf looking back at the other panel at the caption box
EARF
Wait, caption 3 is right, why the fuck am I talking about profits?
PANEL 3
Pull back to the conference room. Jeffers is still sleeping, Jonly is writing into his moleskin notebook. Calvereena is getting water from the water fountain, Earf is standing there confused. K-Dizzle is looking at the papers in front of her. This should be the rest of the page, no panel boarders and should take up the whole page with panels 1 and 2 over top of it.
EARF
Why are we in an office?
JONLY NONLY (THOUGHT BALLOON)
Dangit, gotta fix this.
CAPTION
And with the flip of a the wrist and a scribble of the pen Jonly attempted to resolve the confusion that has been created.
CAPTION 3
It's page 3, and we are already confused on this. This must be the issue Jonly is writing.
CAPTION 2
And I bet it will be full of soap box rants and randomness.
CAPTION
You guys are not nice.
CAPTION 3
We should learn to write better.
CAPTION 2
Are we concerned the creator guy might yell at us again?
CAPTION 3
Well in this volume, or story, or whatever these issues are written by the characters and not the creator, so not really.
CAPTION
Hey! That's supposed to be a secret for the reader to figure out!
CAPTION 3
This is the second to last one in the chapter, if they haven't figured that out by now then we've failed.
CAPTION 2
True.

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Jonly’s Soapbox – Page 03 – Why are we in an office?

You're in an office cause Jonly is a tool. 

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