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PANEL 1
Jonly, Calvereena, Earf, Jeffers, K-Dizzle, Dylerino, and Alberto still standing in front of the action lines and stars from the last panel. All looking at the lines semi confused.
EARF
Uhh...Jonly...why are these line still here?
JONLY NONLY
Great question.
PANEL 2
Jonly reaching up and "knocking" on the panel looking up
JONLY NONLY
Hey! Creator dude! Wake up!
PANEL 3
Side photo of John half a sleep at his laptop. Jonly's hand is coming out of the screen and knocking on John's head
JONLY NONLY (OFF PANEL)
Hey my guy! Wake up! Fix this!
JOHN
Uhh what?
JONLY NONLY (OFF PANEL)
What's the deal with this writing? It's awful!
PANEL 4
View from over John's shoulder looking at the laptop screen with this page being created in photoshop.
JOHN
What do you mean? I thought it was pretty good.
JONLY NONLY
Pretty good? That whole opening page wasn't any good, and you didn't take out the background on this page, it's still here!
PANEL 5
View from over Jonlys shoulder with a photoshop screen overlayed to look like the view is coming out of the screen looking at John.
JOHN
Shit, you're right. I need to lay off the hard drugs.
JONLY NONLY
We both know the hardest drug you do is caffeine, dork.
PANEL 6
Similar view to panel 4, but Johns position is changed to more alert and the page on screen is filled out more with what's happened above.
JONLY NONLY
Now wake the hell up and make this make sense already!
JOHN
Ok ok...
PANEL 7
Action eyes of John
JOHN
I hope he's prepared for non-sense!
JONLY NONLY (OFF PANEL)
I can still hear you!
CAPTION
Are you ready for this? Buckle up!