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PANEL 1
Same place as last panel, the dead fisherman is by himself fishing. Above him we see Jonly falling from the flushed toilet. So some water around him.
JONLY NONLY
Oh gawd!
PANEL 2
Action shot of Jonly falling on the dead fisherman and splatting him like a pancake. You can make this as nasty and bloody as you want.
SFX
SPLAT!
PANEL 3
Jonly is standing, with bits of the fisherman on his backside. The fishermans face should be on his butt. Calvereena is on his back, next to him on the ground is the notebook that has been in his back pocket. Earf has landed in a Super-hero pose. K-Dizzle is floating down (make her look cool doing this somehow)
EARF
Jonly, you uh, got some dead guy on your butt.
FISHERMAN
My names Jorge.
CALVEREENA
The hell are we?
K-DIZZLE
Looks like some river of souls.

PANEL 4
Shot of Jorge the dead fisherman on Jonly's butt.
JONLY NONLY
Could you get off my butt, Jorge? And where did Jeffers go?
FISHERMAN
You'll need to wipe me off and he went into the Labyrinth.
PANEL 5
K-Dizzle, Earf, and Calvereena walking towards the Labyrinth entrance. The notebook is on the ground. Jonly is bending over wiping the fisherman off his butt. The view should be from the Notebook on the ground looking up out to the gang.
JONLY NONLY
Guys, Wait up!
PANEL 6
Inset panel on the bottom right of page. Show a silhouetted hand grabbing the notebook.

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Haunted Mansion – Page 16 – Its Jorge

Oh! there's where I put his name. Oh, and he's did. Damn. 

RIP Jorge

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