Jonly tells a fisherman story that Jeffers hates

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PANEL 1
Jonly, Calvereena, and Jeffers standing in front of a photo of Dyes inlet in Silverdale from the great flood of 2007
JONLY NONLY
So guys, what do you think of the stories so far?
CALVEREENA
Well, I like the one with Skit.
JEFFERS
I think you could do better. It really feels like you are stretching on some of these.
JEFFERS
And there hasn't been one fishing story.
PANEL 2
Fisherman watercolor painting I did. Takes up the whole page behind the panels.
CAPTION
There once was a man who sent fishing in a red shirt, black vest, and hat and a pipe. He was a good fisherman, some say the best.
CAPTION
One day he was standing looking at an old tree when he thought to himself

PANEL 3
Zoom in on fishermans face, inset in between the last two captions in panel 2
FISHERMAN
Why the hell am I fishing all the time? I have wasted my live away! I need a change! I need purpose!
CAPTION
And then he became an accountant, got married, had three kids and moved to the suburbs.
CAPTION
He bowls on tuesday nights with his buddies.
PANEL 4
Jeffers and Jonly standing in front of a photo of Dyes inlet in Silverdale from the great flood of 2007
JEFFERS
That's the worst fishing story ever!
JONLY NONLY
Says you! At least it's not full of lies!

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