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PANEL 1
Jeffers and Jonly standing in front of a photo of Dyes inlet in Silverdale from the great flood of 2007. Jeffers still holding the comic.
JONLY NONLY
I thought that was a lovely little trip for Blinky and his crew! He got to finally live out his dream of riding in a hot air balloon with his pals!
JEFFERS
Yeah, but they they got shot down by the Green Guys and all died!
JONLY NONLY
Allegedly, it was off panel so that means maybe!
PANEL 2
Calvereena sitting on the ground playing with army men. Copy of the old book laying next to him
CALVEREENA
I thought it was a good story, I love playing with my army men!
SERGEANT BLINKY (SMALL)
Hey get yer' dang hands offa me!
PANEL 3
Jeffers picking up the old book, now holding two comics. Calvereena still on the ground and Jonly over to the side
JEFFERS
Wow Jonly, we put this issue out a few years ago and now you're re-releasing it with a few extra pages?
JONLY NONLY
Well, yeah? I mean I wanted to make it better!
JEFFERS
Didn't you learn anything in issue two? Don't George Lucas' your storiesz!
PANEL 4
Jonly upclose kinda confused
JONLY NONLY
I don't think there's any CGI robots in this one. Besides, the extra pages let's us do more character development!
PANEL 5
Rest of page, fills in behind panel 1.
Jonly, Calvereena, and Jeffers standing in front of a photo of Dyes inlet in Silverdale from the great flood of 2007. Cal is still on the ground playing with army men, Jeffers holding the comics
JEFFERS
I think you're confusing character development with shitty layouts and hacked together pages.
JONLY NONLY
You just don't appreciate the subtle nuances that go into this book, but whatever. Calvereena, why don't you tell us a story?