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PANEL 1
Outside house set, no van
Calvereend sitting criss cross apple sauce on the grass, Jeffers next to him
CAPTION 2
What was up with that last page?
CAPTION 3
Yeah, with the tilted panels and shit?
CAPTION
it was supposed to show, artistically, everything falling back into order, panel by panel, after we distracted the reader from you know what.
CAPTION 2
I see. Well, we failed. Just looks like bad panel placment, fix it.
CAPTION
Can't, books already printed.
CALVEREENA
So this one time I was out and about with these chicks in Seattle looking for something fun to do.
CALVEREENA
You know, normal weekend stuff.
CALVEREENA
After a few bars, and lot's of drinks, we decided we should try and find some place a little more intimate.
CAPTION
Chicks? That's a little sexist Calvereena.
PANEL 2
Came as panel one, but zoom over towards the left and just Calvereena in the shot
CALVEREENA
So we left the last bar after some waterfall shows off the blonde's chest to seek refuge in a place with more privacy.
CALVEREENA
This has to happen to more than just me, I swear.
CAPTION
This is going no place good.
PANEL 3
Same as panel one, zoom over to show Jeffers and zoom in. Jeffers has a boner
CALVEREENA
So like the 6 of us find this parking garage and...
JEFFERS
Six of you?
CALVEREENA
Yeah, a blonde, a redheaded drag queen, an Asian girl, a black girl, and an Indian girl, cause I like it spicy.
CAPTION
You shouldn't fetishize a culture, but I guess good on him for inclusivity?
PANEL 4
Same as panel one, zoom over to show Jeffers and zoom in. Jeffers has a boner
CALVEREENA
Do you have a boner?
JEFFERS
Focus on your story!
CALVEREENA
Are you touching yuourself?
JEFFERS
Finish the story dammit!
CAPTION
Yeah, just finish your story.
CAPTION 2
Yeah, just finish your story.
CAPTION 3
Yeah, just finish your story.