PAGE
PANEL 1
Close up of Jeffers writing in his book. In this view we can't see what he is writing.
NO DIALOGUE
PANEL 2
Zoom in and we see on the page this writing, what is typed right here, in this script.
CAPTION
The hell?
PANEL 3
Photo of Gari from the side looking down at the page being drawn, confused look on their face. What you say in this panel may change. I'm thinking it would be cool to have what you say be in your native language and I can have a caption box that translates it to English, what do you think?
GARI
(what the fuck am I drawing?)
¿Qué coger estoy dibujando?

PANEL 4
Similar view to panel 3, but Gari is looking down. Out of the page is Jeffers from the side looking up to them.
JEFFERS
Hey, artist dude, stop lollygagging and let's get on with it.
GARI
(I'm not getting paid enough for this shit.)
No me pagan lo suficiente por esta mierda.
JEFFERS
Sure you are, just draw what I write down, ok? that’s the deal. Only five more pages and you’ll be released from
this hell.
GARI
(This is the dumbest garbage I've ever worked on.)
Esta es la mayor basura en la que he trabajado jamás.
JEFFERS
Same.
PANEL 5
We are back on the boat, Jeffers is writing in the book, we can't see what he's writing. Im thining a low angle looking up to see the back of the notebook. Behind him is Jonly and K-Dizzle.
JONLY NONLY
Jeffers, what you got there?

CHOOSE YOUR STARTING POINT

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