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PANEL 1
Living room set
Earf, and Jonly (crying) standing there.Calvereena sleeping on the couch
EARF
It's ok man, I'm sure he'll come back
JONLY NONLY
I sure hope so...

Below Panel 1 and above panels 2, 3, 4
SFX
THUD!!
PANEL 2
Jonlys O face
PANEL 3
Calvereenas O face (*turn him sideways like he's sleeping)
PANEL 4
Earf - face
PANEL 5
Outside house set
Jeffers laying on the roof. All other panels are over this one
JEFFERS
Ouch...

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