PAGE
PANEL 1
Jeffers and Earf standing on the side of the van talking. Jeffers looks very proud of himself.
JEFFERS
You walk into a bar and there's a line of people waiting to punch you.
EARF
What? Why?
JEFFERS
That's the punchline!
PANEL 2
Close up of Earf's eyes they are full of anger.
NO DIALOGUE
PANEL 3
Earf slapping Jeffers across the face.
PANEL 4
Earf and Jeffers and fighting in the background, Jonly is stepping out of the panel into the white space of the page.
JONLY NONLY
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PANEL 5
Jonly standing in the white space (no panel boarders, white background of the page) full body with a inquisitive look on his face.
JONLY NONLY
We are ten pages into this and all we've done is play cards, go to a market and on some strange alien world.
JONLY NONLY
This doesn't make any sense.
PANEL 6
Jonly is stepping out of the white space and back into the comic panel. The panel should be distorted and you can't really see what's going on in it. Like a water ripple.
JONLY NONLY
This has to be leading somewhere.
CAPTION 3
I wouldn’t bet on it.
CAPTION
Shut up! This ones good!

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Time to Relax – Page 10 – Slap!

Earf and Jeffers should just make our already. 

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